Thursday, February 20, 2014

Write A Story As If You Were A Drop Of Water

I was floating down a cold, gloomy river flowing out of a misty Mountain! I was scared I had no family no friends I was just a little drop of water, seeking an adventure. As the river went on I heard a loud sort of noise it sounded as if it was some sort of ... waterfall, Oh No I thought, I new I was going to die!

I flew into the misty air as though I was flying (I new I wasn't, but it felt like it!) I tried to stay in the air as long as I could but I couldn't help myself, so I landed back in the water. It was quite scary rushing in and out of the ballistic waterfall but it was an adventure.

As soon as I reached the bottom my heart slowed down for a second it felt as if I was in a dream in a completely different world.

The river carried on as the currant pulled me. Just as I was wondering what would come next I bumped into a brown, soggy log that was blocking the river, I thought I could just swim under it but that was blocked off too. I was only little so how could I move that ginormous log I would have to use some help! You see a good thing of being a drop of water is that you can talk to animals it dosent really matter about how big or small it is!  

There were some birds nearby, I called them over "Can you please help me move this log" the birds said a pleasant yes and tried, I could see that the birds were struggling but what could I do to help so I told them they could go. I saw some beavers that were pretty close I asked if they would help so they did, gladly. They had razor sharp teeth I was shore they could bite through the dead wood.  I was right, I said thank you and they left.


I moved on what else could go wrong in a cold, spooky river (lots I guessed)
..... TO BE CONTINUED......




2 comments:

  1. Great story Maya! I love the description you have used and that you have written using paragraphs. Wahooo! Next time I would suggest including the writing prompt as part of the story so other people know what you are writing about. Miss Downard

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  2. How do you make the avatar thingie ?

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